ooops

I have not been very good about blogging at all! I keep forgetting! But not going to lie having no class last thursday was nice. I have my meeting on Tuesday with Mr. McArdle. All of the feedback i got for my paper is really helpful and its always good to have more ideas to add to my paper. I think I can improve a lot of it to make it better!

Birthday weekend!

My 20th birthday was on Friday & it was a pretty good day! It started off kinda crazy, a kid in my first class fell over in his desk & passed out it was very bizarre. But I had to call 911 for him, first time I've ever made that call it was pretty intense! We only have 9 weeks left of school, I know I'm definitely counting down for summer haha. 

warm weather!

Today was once again pretty warm outside! I feel like when the weather is warm everyone is in a better mood at least I know I am. Today was an exhausting and busy day and its good to finally catch a break even though it is hard to find one. My birthday is on Friday & I'll be 20 years old which is pretty old for a freshmen! I can't believe I'm that old its crazy how fast life has passed by. That's all for today!

Chapters 10 & 11

Today we went over chapters 10 & 11, Chapter 10 was about selecting and integrating evidence. For our annotated bibliography we have to make sure that we address to the appropriate audience. Throughout our paper we obviously have to have evidence and we have to site this evidence we have to have 10-15 sources, which might be kinda tough depending on your subject. For chapter 11 we read that not so good paper, about cloning. This paper wasn't very good because the thesis statement wasn't in the correct spot. Also she didn't cite enough in her paper which is always important. Our annotated bibliography rough draft is due Saturday at 11 pm, hopefully we all get it done!

Another paper..

Yesterday we turned in our final drafts of our National Gaze papers. Mr. McArdle went over our new assignment. Our new assignment is we have to do an Annotated Bibliography and it has to include 10-15 sources. We first have to find a cultural touchstone..we have to be able to debate our subject. I have no idea what I'm going to do yet, I still haven't decided and I need to decide probably by tomorrow! We have to turn in our rough draft in by Saturday at 11:00 pm on Saturday! I need to pick a subject first!

Reviewing papers

I'm not going to lie it was nice having class once last week! On Thursday we reviewed the rest of the papers that we were supposed to look over. We ended up finishing all of the papers and we all discussed what could be improved in the papers. We also talked about our final drafts of the paper that is due on Tuesday. I'm going to go to the writing center tomorrow and get my paper checked by someone else, I hope they help me improve my paper more!